The atmosphere in this track is pretty neat, sort of ominous, but I felt like the drums could've been more impactful with a boost in the low end and *maybe* sidechaining if it would work for a track like this. I feel like the white noise stabs near the end could be a couple db quieter too. Something that I can tell is the care which went into the intro and outro sections, which I don't see much for some other tracks on this site.
Keep on going!